DOCUMENTING IMPROVEMENTS IN DRAFTS

DOCUMENTING IMPROVEMENTS IN DRAFTS

Set: Mon Jan 16
Due: next lesson

(complete after every draft)

Make a short powerpoint which identifies how you improved each draft. Remember, BE SPECIFIC and CONCISE!  

Complete this in each draft of your presentations. Remember it is ok to be honest and point out weaknesses to show that you have LEARNED

Organise the boxes by parts from the instructions (A, B, C, D….)

Examples

TITLE: PART O; CONVENTIONS

DRAF T 1	DRAFT 2	DRAFT 3
-incorrect understanding of conventions
-need to have a wider variety of conventions	-we added more correct conventions such as….

TITLE: PART P; STORYBOARD

DRAF T 1	DRAFT 2	DRAFT 3
-incomplete storyboard	-good sketches but not enough and not labelled	-more boxes added, capturing every shot with description under each shot